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[EviL_inK]

just lookin for some c&c been several months since i opened PS i know im rusty. Any tips??

[Paraphrased]

Well, in my opinion I like the effects, I really like the text, but its way to bright =/. Theres not that much depth to it also, and it took a couple looks to realize that it was a person on the foreground =P. Read a couple tuts to just re-familiarize yourself with the basics/advanced stuff of PS, and you'll be back in no time :P. Hope to see some more stuff from you. =D

[Garis]

agree.
its too bright.
also I cant see the focal clearly.
is it the mouth? or the think in the right?

[EviL_inK]

lol the left is her mouth and below her mouth is her hands together the right is the same render just moved up but with some effects. it jsut shows the microphone. Thanks for the tips guys