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[Lauren]

V.1

V.2

V.3

V.4

V.5

V.6

V.7

V.8


V.7 is voted best on another forum I agree because I'm to lazy to incorperate text on V.8 (-_________-)

EDIT:
V.9

[China-DoLL]

Uhm, your latest one (the one down at the signature spot) is really awesome, but.. the one that you posted here now.. Idk.. I really dont like the colors that much, and as it goes for the render, maybe some more blending?

[Lauren]

I thought that was why it looked a little off. But I cannot blend for my life xD

And,

[Papa]

It defintletly needs more blending. Try smudging over the render a bit, and painting a bit it always helps for blending.

The smudging seems to be going in no direction of flow..There is no flow. You should probabaly fix that right now it looks kind of plain and I'm just not feelin it. The smdudgin looks okay, I'm not a giant fan of the texture but it's alright.

Color wise theres soo much going on. I think your last is probabaly your best but i would try limiting the color a bit more.

Compositionally you should read up on the rule of thirds. It's not very appealing at all to have the render smack in the middle like that, I realize composition hardly matters in sigs because they are so...quick and not very serious however you shouldn't have the renders face in the middle of the sig vertically either.

The text is not working, There really isn't a spot for it in this sig since the smdugin is so everywhere.

Work on your flow and your smudging. try to make it flow towards the focal more.

[Immortal.]

yeah without flow a sig is just a bg and something pasted on.
u should really try to bring some flow into the sig. and smudge it like papa said.
still i like the colours a bit, just alot in the bg.
i like v7.
nice stuff...and keep it up man.