This Island Earth

[Aces High]

I was screwing around and ended getting something i really liked. whoda thunkit. the text is the title of the literary magazine at my former high school, i thought it was appropriate. cnc please!
Here it is:

[Garis]

nice stuff. just motion blur are little too strong for me. maybe lower the opacity?

[cC.Aleksander]

The motion blur is nice IMO.
The text needs to be changed tho IMO.

But really nice work

[Garis]

The motion blur is nice IMO.

Matter Of taste

[Papa]

the glow below the planet is cool. you've got some ncie effects going. I think the motion blur is fine. The text, though it's a bit big it's still pretty nice. I like this aces.

[Dale]

Don't like the text too much, too harsh / boring.

And also - The colouring on the earth would look better if you made it black and white ( or 50% b&w ) then added a little blue colour balance, to make it match the lightning type stuff more.

But that's what i would do, not you

[Aces High]

thanks guys for all the help! and dale, i'm going to try what you suggested, thnks for the advice. ill post an edited on eventually

[Aces High]

Ok, I made some adjustments to the blending and the coloring. Thanks for the advice!
Version 2.0 -

[mihaela]

version1 is better
but I am not a professional, of course:P

[ratchetnclank]

V1 ftw. GJ aces.