patty the penguin

[be_fresh]

watsup everyone, new member here, take it easy haha

threw this together last night, playing with patterns
http://befresh.deviantart.com/art/Pa...nguin-95955670

check out the whole gallery if you've got some time,
http://befresh.deviantart.com/gallery/
feedback encouraged!
thanks!

[Papa]

the penguin is okay. I would have liked to see it more thought out, have the dark patterns be shadows the lghts patterns be highlights etc. But it's not bad.

You're typography is very nice though I'm a fan of that you have a cool gallery. If you change the text the obama thing would be killer.

[Pleymo]

The pinguin looks ok to me It's quite artistic but a little bit boring. But your text art is amazin. I've add one to my favourites. I really like it. Enough variation in size and positioning. well done.

[be_fresh]

@papa: yeah good point, a more distinct separation of the stomach/head-feet-fins may have done a lot for me but i like that apparent craziness of it all causing you to look for the quite separation. and about my typo work, thanks!, i'm still really new to that scene, i still need a lot of practice

@pleymo: Thanks! i see you added hoofprint. glad you like it, there's just something about that one im not a fan of lol.

[Immortal.]

nice typography dude...looking nice.