Ironman - Revised

[Immortal.]

I did a ironman back then, i remember i took the same render, and tried a different version.
I like the product. I guess it could use some touch ups. but thats y u guys are here.
tell me wat i could do to fix it up.

[ratchetnclank]

remove the clip on his left arm its distracting, apart from that i love it.

[Immortal.]

ok i'll try. if its the one on the top left thats part of the render.
if u mean the bottom left then ok.

[ratchetnclank]

ok i'll try. if its the one on the top left thats part of the render.
if u mean the bottom left then ok.

Yeah his left arm.
One at bottom.


Looks hawt apart from that

[Immortal.]

thnx ratchet

[Ultima]

Love the text, and smudging. Maybe add a lightsource? Other then that, it's really nice.

[B]

remove the splatter on the bottom right jsut seems like it doesnt belong/pullls my attention from the main source. the one at the top also takes away from the light source coming down over his shoulder.

[Immortal.]

i'll try dat flothy, tho the one at the top aint a clipping mask splatter, its a c4d.

[Papa]

It's tough to see that c4d man. Make it easier to see. Right now he doesn't have a ton of blending with him. I like the clipping mask shatter effects but he still isn't reaslly blended. Work on making him flow with the BG a bit more.
COincidentally you also have to work on your flow of this sig. I see like none tbh. If you add some effects streamlining to one way or somethign i think it would be much cooler. Not bad though i think the rest is really cool, especailly the coloring red + blue = hard color combo.