Well, You need to blend a lot more and better with this one, I dislike how the right side differ's from the left side as much as it does, The text is next to impossible to see, Try using Stock font's, Arial,Times new roman, etc...Also Try using gradient maps to blend it all together better, and you should try add more depth.
i think you should've tried a black bg.
cuz its a bit bright around the render.
and the render is more of a darkish render.
the fire would show much better on black.
however, the attempted efx are nice.
fix it up with some gradient maps.
read up tuts to improve man.
keep it up.
Horseman
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