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[xJTRx]

The first 1 is transperant i know i need to work on it more!

[Fork]

For the second one, you should desaturate the C4D on his face and try to make it skin toned, so it looks as if his face is shattering.

[zole]

Nice idea Fork that would look nice

[xJTRx]

o; did some changes with your idea, seems a lot more balanced! Ty!

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[BonesMa]

I like the idea of the transparent one look forward to seeing the end results.

[Fork]

The edit of the face one, Looks good, The face and C4D just need to be blended together a bit more.

[Immortal.]

nice work, u are def inproving
ur blending is greatly done.
ur ideas are nice and u just need to work a bit more to nail the execution
keep at it man, ur getting htere.

[†john316†™]

they are both nice
but i love #1 idea

i actually like the outcome as well
keep it up man

[xJTRx]

thx for the c&c guys! I'll try to work more on the transparent 1, but i am not sure on the blurred parts... Should i keep it or go back to normal? o.O??

And for the tech sig:
Yea ive still need to do somet touch ups i guess thx for the ideas appreciated!

-Jon