Tatto project

[xJTRx]

(i might need to clean up some parts on the model)

Yea, i tried to make the abstract renders as much as like tattoo's, i will probably make another 1 like this with image combinations.

Tell me wat yew guys think!

[Garis]

there is not much.
only effects(C4Ds) and text
but they are awesome.
I really really love the text.

[xJTRx]

Yea i tried to keep it simple, and yea i am starting to get more into typography.
Also thx

Maybe i'll come up with a v2? But not sure what to put in it tho.

[Papa]

TBH i'm not liking this a ton. It's okay but really doesn't seem like a lot. I'm not saying this to be mean i'm rly not because your a good artist, but just because putting a c4d with a blending option on her back, on a model doesn't rly look that good.
The top of the c4d on her hair hair ends with the soft brush you use to mask it out. Also The line on her head going down just vanishes slowly which again tells me soft brush.

Now with the black scarf you did a good job you cut out the c4d. But tbh I'm not rly sure that was intentional. You used a blending option on the back (i'm pretty sure..). And so the c4d wouldn't show on black with a blending option anyway.
Either way it's not there so i guess thats good.
However you did overlap it onto her dress, which doens't make sense. Tatto's don't show through dresses.

I think you just need to work on execution. Work on your transitions from one thing to the next, and when your done look at and at specific parts and think, does this make sense?
Again I'm not sayig this to be mean, it's just my opinion.

[xJTRx]

o;! Thx for the C&C Papa, and no man i take all the C&C to the hearth, and you said everything i did on the spot o; I'll try to look for better blending and cleaning up some parts next time, i guess i should slow down and check it after a certain point. Thx again i appreciate the C&C! ;D