Lolz Not so good at sigs.

[Gifted]

Lolz Im Not So Good But What Do yew think of it?

[BonesMa]

Focal is a bit all over the place sorry.

I like what you are trying to achieve and the render looks good but for me a lot more needs to be done.

Try not to center your render all the time when its small like that makes you have to do a lot to fill empty spaces.

The BG of the tag is good but does not seem to blend in well with the render.

Sorry to be negative keep at it I like where you are going.

[Gifted]

Lolz Meh i only started this year so im still learning thanks. =D

[Papa]

WOrk on not using so many brushes. The render seems pretty godd and it looks like you got your lighting pretty well. WOrk on making your BG's. I suggest smudging them a bit. That tends to work pretty well, especailyl if your still learning, otherwise c4ds and other effects will work well too.