Fly High...

[Lauren]

I can't decide if I like this one or not ._.

[Aces High]

This is a really cool idea. I like it for the most part, except the colors are a little off. Maybe throw some brown into the blended areas around the render. and it looks like there is a combo motion blur and smudge brush involved, which is cool, but some areas aren't blended very well. Awesome idea though, touch it up a bit and I would say "Grade A." nice work!

[Aces High]

Wait, do you use gimp?

[Lauren]

Yeah.

[Papa]

lol yeah it's pretty surprising to know you use gimp.
The text needs work. Stay away from storkes like that it just doesn't help it much.

The arrow throws me off quite a bit too, pretty random and un-nessescary.
lol i'm not quite sure what's going on with the penguin like thing..so maybe work on clearing that up.