Following Okami tut.

[Lauren]

I got a bit lazy near the end, I'll probably retouch or try again.

[Aces High]

Nice job! This is really cool. There's a lot going on, but you did a good job of keeping it fairly clean nonetheless. Good work, keep it up!

[Lew]

the render seem a bit blury, maybe sharpen it a bit more.

[Lauren]

Thanks for the feedback guys ^^
V2

[[PHXN] New001]

Not bad not bad. I little chaotic though, your flare in the right draws away all the focus from the render itself though.
The two opposing colors are nice, and well blended, but I think there are just such conflicts in focus on this sig, that it distracts. It took me a second to recognize the stock.

However overall a good sig. Well done indeed.