smoke

[Lew]

was bored...took me 5 mins lol.

[flatty]

it might have took you 5 min, but i still like it
the effects are great

[ChinaRed]

Wow, I wish I could make something like that in 5 minutes, its really stricking, very nice indeed

[Elramo]

Yeah really nice effects for the smoke.

[Studhorse]

Quick, simple and very nice.

[Garis]

quick simple and not your best at all.
whats wrong?
you can do way better.
wtf?
stock text and "smokes".
I'm missing your amazing stuff.

[Lew]

quick simple and not your best at all.
whats wrong?
you can do way better.
wtf?
stock text and "smokes".
I'm missing your amazing stuff.

Took me 5 mins to make it...
Obviously it's not my best.
Just trying different stuff.

[†john316†™]

honestly i don't like it

i mean hmm yeah its just stock text and kinda smoke thing

but the smoke doesn't really look like smoke to me
it also doesn't start at the end of the cigarette
but rather it originates from the middle
???
which makes no sense at all

the lighting is ok
but it looks like you erased some part of the chair the stock was sitting on in the bottom right hand corner

looks very odd and out of proportion

also back to the smoke effect
i think it should have started alot thinner then grew wider as it went up
not be one solid thick column of smoke
its not very realistic

but those are my major problems with it

i do however love the concept and the idea

but i can't say i like the sig very much
sorry

[Papa]

I gotta say i compleltly agree with John. The effects doesn't look like smoke, and the starting place is messed.

I like the concept, but really i can't say it's original either. I'v seen like 5 billion of these, and though it's with a different stock, means it has to be absolutly flawless. It has to stand out from the rest.

[Fork]

Well actually, The starting place isn't all that wrong, I don't know how many of you actually smoke but if you hold the stogy at an angle it makes it look like the smoke is indeed coming from the middle but in all reality it's just traveling upwards.