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Well this is my third ever signature in photoshop, I did a bit it GIMP before but not much.
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effects arent good.
text is too distracting. render is covered by many things. border is ugly
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Nyxar don't just put bad comments.
The boarder isn't that bad but it's better to go without or try a cinema border in black usually.
If you uncover the render a bit more it would look alot better but you're going good for a beginner try looking at some tutorials i recommend Daemon's smudge one and just take a look about them see if you find a style you like.
         
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I agree with skate. Nyxar it's great your commenting and giving the OP crits, but you have to help them fix it or make it better. Give them a few tips.
The first thing i notice is that there are a bunch of ghosting artifacts that are hovering overtop of the render. You want to try and steer away from that, while it's nice to have them overlap a bit for blending, you don't want them covering the middle of the face, thats just distracting.
BG isn't bad, However i reccomend you blur some of the edge and parts of the middle for depth.
Pretty nice blending i must say, and you used that fractal well.
The border:
Try and use solid colors like black and white, they blend better than others and tend to draw your eyes away from the focal less. Now also i see you made it part transperant, you don't want to do that. the point of a border is ot seperate the sig from the forum so by makeing it semi-transperant you are rendering it useless, and only drawing away from the focal (the man).
Long story short^^ don't make your Borders transperangt and use black and white.
GOOD TEXT! NOw the color is a bit bright, however it's very encouraging seeing you using default fonts. Stick with that use default fonts they blend better than any downlaoded font you will find 90% of the time. Just next time try to make the color less bright and distracting.
Overall not bad, however i reccomend you take some tutorials to pick up some fo the basics and good techniques.
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well that blue stuff all over the focal kinda distracted me at first and made me think it was something else but then I looked closer. Thats all I have to contribute, other than that it's pretty cool, but kinda mediocre.
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Thanks guys for all your supportive comments. I will look at some more tutorials and stuff:P
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