Screaming GIrl

[crazycata]

This is actually my first SOTW tag and my first tag that i've made using just cliping masks
Comms are welcomed

[Papa]

SOrry for the lack of comments. I gotta say im kind of dissapointed usually void member are more considerate then to let a sig go to page 2 with 0 comments.

I'm bringin this back.
The clipping masks on this are pretty good i think you did a nice job with them. I think you should try and use some more flow with them however. Have them tend towrads the render in a specific motion. Kind of like a graph. WHen it is a positive graph it goes from the bottom to the right and up. Well do the same thing here and you have some good flow. Or maybe in this it'd be better with a negative graph. your pick

The colors on this are actually pretty nice. I didnt expect that blue to go with that brown but it did and it worked. Very nice job.
You need to overlap some more things though. YOur afraid to cut too much of the render off by by overlapping, dont worry about it as long as the focal isn't covered.
FInally add some lighting and this would be much better.

Overall pretty good but it seems a bit too symmetrical with the effects.