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[Miril]

School sucks, but in my free time... well, this is one I just did quickly:



C&C please, thanks in advance!

--I know the text clashes, it was meant to give some.. I dunno, "contrast" if you can call it that, but I think its baaad now...

[Papa]

NOt bad, i just think it's a bit busy.
The rain doesn't healp to make it more minimal. I think you should add some depth to the BG by blurring it a bit and then make it darker. it's make it so much better.

If you add an effect c4d to this i think it'd really set it off. Try it out set it to linear dodge and erase parts you don't like.

[Suddu]

great cnc papa bear

Too busy,darken the sides..then it will be better

[Helix]

That's a cool effect but imo if you cleaned it up it'd be a great sig!

[Miril]

Here it is again after a little editing, I added in an effect c4d and darkened the sides, added (I think) a little more depth and tried to clean it up. I can't figure out how i might get rid of some of the rain drops on the focal because they're part of the stock itself >.< but otherwise.. what do ya think? Ohh and I changed the text! As you said Papa it is busy, I'm not really good at calm/organized things... I tend to just plop a lot of effects on something and say "hey that looks cool..." I should really take the time to plan out one of these one day :O