Beyond Good And Evil

[YaminoSoul]

Tried a new style, It came out OK.
V1



C & C. Please???

[Joost]

I dont know what ur normal style is, but this one stinks imo.
I dont like it sorry, the effect didnt ''come togather''.
And tbh text is but sukky.

BUT, still it is a good tag seeing some others on the web.
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[xJTRx]

v2 is better, bring out more depth. Also work on your text placement and the c4d's there aren't really needed, unless you blend them well with the sig. Heres a tip, if you want to blend a c4d pick out a gardient and clip mask it to the c4d ;p.

[Papa]

I dont know what ur normal style is, but this one stinks imo.
I dont like it sorry, the effect didnt ''come togather''.
And tbh text is but sukky.

BUT, still it is a good tag seeing some others on the web.
[7|10] < yer rate

Joost You cannot rate unless the artist askes for it.
Also tell him/her how to fix it rather than just saying what is bad.

The effects are nice, because i think typically they would work on another sig. They just don't really work on this one. Try doing a few cliping masks from the BG and a greenc4d or somehting. That should help your effects a lot.

The BG is okay but i would like to see somehting more there rather than just a blurred stock. AGain a c4d in there should help it otherwise if you add a texture to the BG or something that helps too.

I reccomend you read my text tutorial it's one of the [x]'s in my sig lol not quite sure which one but it's there. I think it would help you with text a lot.

Also yamino i liek the etxt style of your name that text looks nice.

Overall i gotta say im not rly a fan of this new style either. it needs some tweaking.

[YaminoSoul]

Lol, this makes me feel like a total noob. Thanks a lot, really helpful and good explained!!!

[Jool]

The thing I really hate is the font. -_-

Change that, add some clipping masks and it's finished.