"Think about your life" a vector - abstract collab

[Helix]

http://helixdesigner.deviantart.com/...life-105822542

thanks!! sorry it's too large to post here

[Aces High]

Awesome work. Two things: One) I feel like the vector addition would make it OK/worthwhile to add text, especially with a title like that. And Two) Some of the vector sections look a little blurry, like they were sized up and lost quality. Maybe that's just me. Actually, I just realized I'm not wearing my glasses, so that could have been it. Anyways, awesome work! Keep 'em coming!

[Helix]

Awesome work. Two things: One) I feel like the vector addition would make it OK/worthwhile to add text, especially with a title like that. And Two) Some of the vector sections look a little blurry, like they were sized up and lost quality. Maybe that's just me. Actually, I just realized I'm not wearing my glasses, so that could have been it. Anyways, awesome work! Keep 'em coming!

you're completely correct.. it was sized up and it did lose quality... he scanned it huge but had to size it down to send it to me.. hopefully i'll use some of his full-size stuff for later lp's

[Helix]

really.. no one else has anything to say...??

[Helix]

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[Papa]

Heix please don't bump we don't allow it at gfxvoid, and if you give people time they will respond.

Overall it's not bad. But i think you need to work on the BG. everythign seems really mismatch and wobbly. It's not bad to have blank space. Minimalism is somehting that should be used in every peice IMO. You need more minimalism.

The flow, adding minimalism will also help the flow. Right now i see non as stuff is just coming from everywhere and really is too jumbled to make out.

The color combos dont work for me. There's just too much, greens reds, oranges yellows. Get a better color scheme and it'd help it a lot.

[Helix]

lol okay i'll just re-post it

[Ptka]

The colours I don't like, but obviously it has some nice looking style. Like the background and the C4D, but only as if they were to separate things, I don't think they look great together, because the colours kind of skew them. Nice idea, just needs a bit more work!