star trooper

[tekken]

inspired by a few of Bones tags, so tried something similar. CNC welcome.

[RavenE]

Its okay. The lighting in the top left is a bit too bright IMO. Maybe some c4d to blend it into the bg.

[BonesMa]

hehe tekken its not bad.

The BG lighting works realy well.

Add some blue photofilters over this and it would look tight.

[Joodi]

I like it! I dont like the text at all, but thats just me.

[Ptka]

Try a sans serif font, because the helmet is curved and the text is like a brick wall that stops that flow. Put a blue gradient map over top with some blending options to try and bring out that gorgeous blue that is in his mask.
The light source is also a bit too bright just take that one down a notch.
Nice job but a bit over contrasted in parts.