crysis

[cc.mio]

quick one
comments?

[ratchetnclank]

smudging is good but it really needs c4d effects and depth.

Your text needs serious work too.

[Ptka]

Good smudging but not much flow, it's a bit chaotic with the random smudges.
As RnC said, the text isn't great, remember KISS (Keep It Simple Stupid) when it comes to text.
Not much to say, just keep on working at it!!!

[BonesMa]

Good smudging.
Text placement is perfect just needs to be blended in a bit.

[cc.mio]

yeah the text is horrible, can someone post me here link for some good text tutorial please?

[cc.mio]

i tried to make some depth, add effects, light source and change text
v. 2 better?