broken dreams

[be_fresh]

watup, been a while, i got inspired by this guy http://www.youtube.com/user/SuburbanInvasion (check him out!) so i threw together a couple pieces, cnc if you wouldn't mind




http://befresh.deviantart.com/

[RavenE]

The first ones, text effect is pretty cool.

The second one is good two, but to much 'paper' (blank areas).

Good overall though

[Aces High]

As far as design concepts go, these are both really neat. I agree, the text effects in 1 are niiiice. And I like two a lot too, blank space can be a design element as well. Are those brushes or something else? Anyways, nice work. Love the idea and end result

[Ptka]

The first one I love, that effect is really great and all that negative space really works.
The second one is a bit too empty for me, and I don't really like the effect.
Still looks good, but not quite as nice as the first.
Keep working on that first one, try to figure out more things you can add.

[Papa]

THe first one is bomb! SIck job on that man it's fantastic.

The second would be awesome but the brown makes it too dark, lighten up the paper color a bti and make it brighter.

[be_fresh]

thanks everyone, appreciate the comments and i know, haha, i'm not a fan of the second one to much anymore either, you guys ever make somethin and think its all hot shit and you pop it on devart or whatever and the next day your all like wtf? what was i thinking, this is not done, i think this is a classic case haha

giant run-on sentences ftw lol