Portal

[eagles16]

[Papa]

I get what you were doing but i don't think you did it correctly.
The thing that really bothers me is that the perspective on the two stocks are pointing two difference ways. The effects are pretty cool though and the text is nice. I just think it needs a bit more. DOn't know what but it feels empty.

[eagles16]

yeah, at the end i was like, hmm what can i add and i went blank