Vector - rate/hate

[Velocity]

Been about 5 weeks in the making, something like 75 total cumulative hours worked on it.

I'm going to print it off as a poster tomorrow, it's going to be a gift for my Girlfriend.

I always welcome criticism, so have at it!



Quick edit:

Refrence Picture -

Other fun stuff -

Same thing at 300% [I usually worked at 1600-3200%]

[Papa]

While all that work is impressive, you should have smoothened out the egdes of you guys. The egdes of her jacket are really rough and IMO if your going to bother to vector something that in-detail you should atleast smoothen out the edges on the sides.

[Dale]

For the amount of effort you put in, i think it's impressive.

But i'm really sorry to say that rather than detail, you could have used your lighting effectively and spent 10 hours on the vectoring, and the other 65 on composition to make it look better if you wished.

The BG Colour and text don't look too good imo!

However i am sure she will absolutely love it, + you will be getting some.

[Ptka]

Haha Dale, had to bring that up.
Yeah it's really great, as Papa said those straight edges are really...straight.
Smooth them out and you'll have a masterpiece. :P

[Daemon]

I agree with all that dale said, the composition and then bg and text ruins the overall feeling for me, but hey girls dig these things ;D