searching for freedom

[a3.]

searching for freedom

[Firescorpio]

my suggestion for you is that instead of trying 3 or 4 lp's per day work more on finesse, composition, color scheme,

i have been seeing ur LP's they aren't bad they just seem a bit all over the place for me normally in an LP it is different as in a sig you dont have a focal point but a common direction and message you want to infer, to the viewer, depending on whats your message you need to convey the elements in your work to guide the eye smoothly through it. Now this meaning that if you want to have a very heavy quantity opf elemtns within your piece you can do se but. you need to take into account 3 basic rules of composition.

direction- every LP must have a common direction so that elements dont fly around and at the end the viewer gets lost in what is called Noise.

social/culutarl/economic filters- this means that you need to convey your message in a way that you avoid falling into stereotype's, gender roles, and social atributions of color and shapes. this meaning trying to simplify your image helps through the process of compilation.


anchoring the idea- before even atempting a LP it is wiser to do a draft of it, because as we all know it is one way how we look at it and how we picture it and the results are normally others.

when you take into consideration the color scheme's that are dequate for your idea, the usage of textures or not, lines, inorganic shapes such as non geometrical figures or geomotrical figures that have sometimes no direct attachment to any social point of view, or organic such as sotcks, or things tht hve a social weight and visual impact on first sight.

you need to anchor the idea into a whole and that is text is there for as to the common belief in the forum, the rules of text applied for signature, isn't close to what the usage of text in a LP profesionally speaking is meant to do, hard to explain but text is a whole universe apart from the complete LP itself can be used to take way the main focus and then drive the viewer towards the rest or just anchoring into perfect balance the whole thing.

so taking into accounts this rules for your LP might help you for what i can ee in yours you take no composition, text, color or anything in consideration, you go by what i feel looks good. which is a great deal of designing but isnt the whole deal, when creating a peice and specially one that conveys the message, you need to really take care into the details and how it is conveyed to the viewer, for you have to make it in order so the rest of the people regardless their culture, social status, economic state etc get a clear idea of what is what you are giving

as atempts your LP's are ok and you have soem nifty ideas but but they don't have the spectrum to qualify them as complete imho, its hard to make heads and tails out of them, but as said before its just a matter of finesse and work

hope you find this usefull =P

[a3.]

thx for the feedback..if only i had time to do 3/4 lp a day

[Ptka]

Jesus, FireScorpio can TYPE.
All of your LP's are kind of the same, but you have some awesome effects.
Great colours but everything is a bit random.
Just think more about it, take longer on them, and step outside of the boundaries, you could go on forever making these but to make something truly original and new would be better.
Good job on it, keep your flair just change up the style.