Sympathy for the Devil

[Firescorpio]

this is a piece inspired by the Rolling Stones- Sympathy for the devil, the irony, and my own personal feeling added of what i think of religion, and God & the Devil .

Hope you Enjoy it and like it

edit: sorry i hadn't posted the finished version my bad

here it is :

[ratchetnclank]

The ink looking smudge im really not digging. The text is fine but the blue maybe a bit too bright.

My main issue is the red eyes on the stock look completely out of place, lower the opacity of the red colour. The other thing is the white edge to the stock. Sort out this and you got a swish lp

[Miril]

I dunno what you're talking about ratchet, im in love with it ahaha
The blue is nice imo, there's enough of the text so that it doesn't seem like its out of place and its just its own thing
though you do need to lower the opacity of the red on the guy's eyes a bit :P

OOO I SEE SOME GRAMMATICAL ERRORS IN DAH BG!! SHAME, SHAME!

[Firescorpio]

sorry bout that handt posted the final version =P made an edit to the original