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[Immortal.]

dam i got a purple obsession.
someting from a bit back, just finished it off.
opinions?

[Firescorpio]

hmm ok u know im a big fan of your stuff, and i do like this to an extent, you are abusing a but the C4d usage and in this one it turned out a bit 2 chaotic. first off the colorign with that gradient map over it certainly kills it for me for it feels opaque yet the c4d's are bright, the lower shinign spot seems out of place, and completely not belonging.

as for the compo and flow its kidna broken here your c4d's go up yet she is lookign down so they clash around and seem sort of out of place. deptj is ok but all the otehr details kinda seem hard to focus on the sig

the tgext in this one well it seems idk honestly bro? as if a ripper had taken ur sig and slapped huge text over yours >.<

overall i think you are trying too hard to work with c4d's and over exposing some errors through these i personally would like you to go back to the old kick ass immortal which had a very varied styel that consisted about mixing stuff around and always keeping it fresh.

[OptiMAT Prime]

Im sorry Immortal but i sort of agree. I dont use 3D Renders at all, and although in that piece i can understand what you were going for in all cases, there's a few thing's i'd change.
The light in the BLeft is really bright and would have some affect on the girl, I think there's maybe too much fade blending, and the font choice is - although unconvential, and good in that respect - just doesn't work for me. Finally, all the 3D Renders make it hard to identify the focus.

Lastly, some positive points:
Nice colours! i like purple and gold too >.>
Most of the lighting effects are nicely finished off and placed
The skyline in the BG compliments it well

[KidBuu]

no no no immo u r going the wrong way. Well i dont know about others but i think u are getting lazy to make tags and in turn making them worse. If i say directly its not the best of u. If i say exlplainatory, its looking too dull. the text is yucky(cant believe i m telling this to a master of text)
The c4d is showing too much and instead of cr8ting flow its cr8ting attraction, which the render should have done lol.
If you ask me, its like a newbie designer made that sig adding all the purple gradients,
I must say u are really addicted to purple and that too a dull one.