Spiderman

[athlektis]

Hey

I'll have just found a graphic forum, and I will uploade one of my now:



Any criticism?

I'm sorry for my english, I'm live in Denmark

[KidBuu]

i see lotsa flow there but
there can be something more out there. or maybe the bg is too much red. maybe a c4d will do the trick, make sure that c4d si diff color then red.
and remove text or symbol. its yucky.

[Fur]

I kind of like it, but IMO the render needs more blending and the text needs a lot of work try and make it blend in more so it doesnt take away from the focal point.

[flatty]

nice flow

but i miss some owning effect

GJ