Red Knight

[Paraphrased]

First sig in a really long time =o. CnC is always welcome.=)

[Newton]

the render looks really lq and hard to tell wat it is........i could barley see the text....i would move it up so u can see it better

[BAB]

Yes, its kind of blurry and thats makes the lq....keep on trying

greets
BAB

[Paraphrased]

I made the text so you couldn't read it, it's just something so no one can rip it, not like they would =P.

[KidBuu]

err paraphrased... this is not ur work really pls tell me. this isnt urs.

[Paraphrased]

Yes it is... why where do you see it ripped from?

[KidBuu]

para.. u dint understand the irony....
by that i mean i couldnt believe u cr8 such a bad tag.
why i mean there is nothing i can see barely make out some shapes coz of the blurr etc etc.
i dint mean u ripped it i meant u can u a lot lot better then this one. 100% better.

[Paraphrased]

oh... very nice critisism :S...

[KidBuu]

ur so schweet para xD
sorry for whatever i had said.

[Papa]

kidbuu, if you dont have anything nice to say don't say it. GFxvoid doesn't allow flaming of artists no mater how well you think you know them.
Saying things like "err paraphrased... this is not ur work really pls tell me. this isnt urs." does not help the artist[s].
You've been warned.

anyway paraphrased. I think this is a good start but it seems a bit like a wip. What you need to do is take off some of the effects over the render cause right now i can hardly see it.

Then add a few c4d's and add on streaking acorss from the right to the left and set it to multiply, and then work around that and add more c4d's.
This should help the emptiness and would really work with your smudged bg.

Good compo! finally. This is the first sig i commented this morning where the render isn't smack in the middle.