Island (2nd LP ever)

[Fur]

Hey guys its my 2nd LP ever so was just wondering how it looks CnC plz!!!

[Metal1]

ok im confused as to what the focal point is. Is it the moon? is it emma watson? is it the waves? Another critism is the image seems LQ in the sky. Apart from that, the idea is really unique. Im guessing you either drew or got them wings from somewhere else, but the idea is good. Shes like a fallen angel, a spirit or ghost. The lighting from the moon is really good.

[Fur]

Suppose to be more of Emma but the moon is really bright witch I know takes away from the focal, and yeah I just noticed the sky is really LQ. thx for the comments

[Papa]

I'm with metal the focal is nto clear at all.
Andt the fact that ther eis a line goign right through her head bothers me, either make her see through or dont, but pick one cause it's annoying.

the lighting on the clouds is off. i would fix that..dont' know how to really either darken it or scrap em but they look unrealistic.

the lighting on the mountains is off, normally a silhoutte look liek that would come from the lightsource being behind it. You could try to fake some detail into them with a texture.

not bad but needs mroe attention to details.
the blending between stocks is pretty great.

[KidBuu]

yeah i go with papa
stock blending of the mountains and the ocean is pretty good and moon fits good bet them. but emma is very light there.
and btw i dont think emma is needed there.

[Lewk]

Right, with the sky, its rather off, the clouds are too low. It seems very dark, B/W Gradient map on screen would help it, dodging and burning is a definate yes.

That sounded very negative <_<
Anyway, with the positivity. after all its snowing here. The blendings tight on this and it looks awsome.

Good work Furry (:

[Virtue]

I screwed a girl who looked like Emma Watson once.

[ratchetnclank]

I screwed a girl who looked like Emma Watson once.

Feel sorry for you xD