For Graphics Class

[Dale]

Although it may not appeal as artwork, this is just a piece to show progression of my design.

In this case, typography, i'm looking at different styles of font to go with a LAN Cafe with this piece. The project is to do some branding images for the Cafe. Mine will be called eShots.

I'm going to to a sort of dirty Bioshock style theme set and a nice clean / retro avenue. See what turns out best, and develop it into some final pieces ( Ie logo / posters / mugs / stickers / cafe designs / artwork for Cafe )

[Samuel]

I like the second from top. Its not so busy like others.

[ratchetnclank]

2nd for definite. It trips out my eyes though *head is spinning*

[Dale]

They're easier to see when they're on their own

I realised this when I put them all together, hahah

[Studhorse]

yea, maybe better apart, but can't say I'm a fan of either the font or the colors, but that's just one man's opinion.

[Fur]

I like the very last one

[Scrib]

2nd last one for me. gj

[Ptka]

Jumping on the bandwagon, I have to go with the second one.
The other white ones are mostly alright, but the ones that turn darker and then into black are WAY too hard to read.
Nice job on the colours however, not too bright, just good and simple.
Looks like Aztec writings...

[Papa]

the colors are decent but the mixture of font + that gray square in middle just amkes it mind boggling. i would really try to "dumb it down" a bit. Otherwise i like it.