Dead Space

[smallboss]

i quite like this although im not too sure on the c4d =/

C&C would be most appreciated

[MarkPancake]

Not too great effects on the C4Ds. It's a bit hard to make out the render and it's not very well blended. I can see what you're trying to do and with a bit more work it'll be great. Text needs redoing though, takes attention away from the focal, try lowering the opacity and repositioning it.

[smallboss]

il try that, thanks

[catch.]

yeah quite like it but the sudden transition into bg needs to be more gradual. For the text maybe try positioning it under the renders right are ( as we look at it ) and have it bright.. that way the focus will still be in the same place.