If I were a fish!!

[Suddu]

http://suddu001.deviantart.com/art/I...fish-117901560


CnC!

[MarkPancake]

It's nice but looks like a complete wip to me. Firstly it's extremely sketchy, I know it's your style but there is stray lines. Secondly, random shapes began appearing near her head, yet there was just 3. No more? They seem kinda outta place to me, no resemblance to anything else.

Keep working at it Sud, but it's not finished imo. Nice job though.

[ratchetnclank]

Its an alright style what you are going for but i need colour. Different colour lines to break it up a bit.

[Papa]

yea the style you are using really depends on color and a solid understanding of the elements of art. Since it is so minimalistic you really need to know what will make a solid, aesthetically appealing artwork. not bad, but it seems a bit too doodly.

The stuff ont he windows doesn't rly match it either so it's a bti off.
Last but not least the groud is a bit too dark for this picture, You need something more retro and hip. Like a checkerboard kicthedn floor like in all those 80's shows. That'd make this sick IMO.. if done right.

Overall not bad, but it's a bit wip still, just work on it more, you'll get it.