This is what the world is for, making electricity

[Phzed]

"This is what the world is for, Making Electricity"

MGMT - Electric Feel


http://twgfxdesign.deviantart.com/ar...-for-117999208

The LP I've been working on for so long.
If you have dA, and you want, please favourite and comment.
Thanks.

[Dale]

Very nice

Colours look really good, moody

I am not too keen on the bordering, but the centre of the image etc looks wicked.

Just the little squares bug me!

[Samuel]

I don't really like this. It's really busy, without a defined theme. I don't get where the electricity is per say.

Just kinda blah, for me.

[Papa]

IM with samuel on this one. Sry about it too cause usually ur work is soo good, but this one definetly doesnt meet the mark.

The BG looks like a ton of vector brushes, i dont like it, there seems to be no flow and the brushes dont do anthign for it.

The text is in a pretty random place. The paper tearing over top of those squares makesno sense tome at all. Your giving me a techy feeling and yet here comes this random paper and look it's also torn. It just doesnt mesh with your whole theme.

Again with the cracks at the bottom.
The random electricity thing whcih seems to ruin the focal, ie- the text.
Also the random play button? yeah it's futuristic, but man, i thought this was about electricity..where did music come in? Unless those r speakersm on the side, but it still seems a bti odd.

I'd work on your concept, it's a cool idea. But how everythign flows together isn't working. i';d like to see something more original from you since your work is usually just amazing.

[Phzed]

Thanks for the comments.

I will do some work here and there on it, but I don't think it's my style really.. At the moment anyway.
It took me waay too long to make, I don't have a lot of free time, so I've been doing it over a period of 2 months.

What ruins it for me is that I started with no concept, and slapped the lyrics on as an afterthought 'cause they kinda suited.. not the best idea.

[Phzed]

Any more comments?

Please fav.. if you want to.
It would be most appreciated.

[navb01]

I like the concept of the design and it looks really nice but I think you could make the text a little bit easier to read!