WiP My First LP

[Scrib]

http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/s...x/Lpcopy-1.jpg

Any suggestions? Its not finished yet.

[Fuzer]

Thats a wip? o.O looks sick as is tbh imo. Maybe use some of the pattern on the amp and implement it into the blank spaces somehow? also, im not fond of the text at the top >.< but thats just me, good work man! <3

[MarkPancake]

Well you heard what I said. Perhaps try and incorporate a general idea into it, a meaning. Such as the heart monitor with the actual heart. Then possibly music comes from the heart or something.

[Scrib]

ty 4 the kind comments and suggestions as i said its wip i wanna make it awsome cause its my first

[Scrib]

any more suggestions?

[BonesMa]

Very nice work this is how to do this type of style.

Only thing I would change is the blue and white lines left of the speaker dont like them they are distracting remove them totaly and have nothing there.

[Scrib]

ok ty man

[cC.Aleksander]

The pattern/texture on the left side of the speaker dosn't look to good imo. Remove it and just keep it on the front. Would look way better. But the rest look sick!

[SamusM]

not bad, could use some more effects on upper left side, seems blank, good job tho.

[navb01]

So far its off to a great start, lots of things that catch the eye try to add some more stuff to the upper black part of the image without making it too over the top!