)Spiderman (everyone has one

[navb01]

Well I know everyone makes a spiderman one so here is mine ha!


v2


added some scan lines and fixed opacity on the text box

now what could I do to improve this!

like how about the background what would help this sig stand out a bit more!

heres one with a c4d smudged just messing around

[IiTz ShAnE]

I like the render, nice choice. To be honest the right is a bit dull maybe add a few things im not sure what but you im sure will lol. Keep up the good work

PS.
Thats better than my one lol

[navb01]

I like the c4d in your those yeah I just realized that, ill try to spice it up :P

[Kanariya]

The image is a nice choice, rather well place but the sig overall looks really empty. Work on the text a little more as it's also kinda bland and dull.

Try popping in some cool C4Ds, maybe mess around and make it look 'webby'.

[Chris]

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that "insert cool c4d here" isn't always a fix it solution or necessarily the best idea.

If you hate me for saying that, I'm sorry.

The box the text is sitting on could probably be elaborated on a bit more. It's kind of vague and unfinished. Maybe increase the opacity, and it won't look quite as transparent. An opaque look might be a better direction. The text seems a bit overdone on top of the bar. I think in general, this piece just needs a bit more detail and overall work. Try to put more of yourself into it, and be creative.

[Kanariya]

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that "insert cool c4d here" isn't always a fix it solution or necessarily the best idea.

If you hate me for saying that, I'm sorry.

Course not.

I can just see a small black and red one, quite spikey... fitting nicely.

[Chris]

Well, hopefully you don't take me the wrong way. I'm sure, with the appropriate placement and method, it probably would work, I just don't like to see it become the solution to every problem. It becomes quite redundant to see people say "I think it would be better with some cool c4d". It kind of detracts from the purpose of design. As you can probably guess, I'm a stickler for cliche's and I do my best to eliminate potentially good design from being ruined by them. D:

Kudos.

[navb01]

well thankyou both for the great feedback ill mess around with some stuff and post a v2

[Kanariya]

Well, hopefully you don't take me the wrong way. I'm sure, with the appropriate placement and method, it probably would work, I just don't like to see it become the solution to every problem. It becomes quite redundant to see people say "I think it would be better with some cool c4d". It kind of detracts from the purpose of design. As you can probably guess, I'm a stickler for cliche's and I do my best to eliminate potentially good design from being ruined by them. D:

Kudos.

I totally get what you mean, I don't actually use C4D's myself. Suggestion to try adding something is not necessarily saying it would work - or that it is needed. It's just nice to experiment with different ideas to see which works best for the sig.
Just thought the right hand side needed filling up as it looks rather spacious, however after adding colour the sig looks better already. Goes to show what a spot of colour can do.

[SSSSK]

stop abusing scanlines!
when usuing scanlines only use it in small area's, like one of pap's sigs, that purple one with the woman, ask him to post it here so then you can see what i mean