Second Sprite Ever

[cheesy GFX]

Okay, i made a sprite sig a bit ago and it didn't turn out very well so i gave it another try, i followed some parts of a tut but i couldn't follow it completely because it was Photoshop. So here it is:



C&C will be much appreciated :P

[henriny]

Decent done mate, all thougth the focal is abit hard to see.

[cheesy GFX]

I wanted the effect of the focal to be hiding behind all the c4d's and i thought it would have looked weird if it was just placed on top of everything.

[cC.ShorterGFX]

i like it alot. what program do u use then if not photoshop ?

[cheesy GFX]

GIMP

[Papa]

You need a bit more focus on the focal. right now there are c4d's everywhere, it's tough to stay on it. Work on bringing it out more. Also its smack inn he center.. whats with that? never forget ther rule of thirds dude.

text is not bad, good job.
The flow on this tag is great, you god all of it going to one side and really sweeps your eye towards the render. nice.

[Samuel]

Sprites are horrible for signatures, but it looks good other than that.

[Scrib]

i hate sprite tags myself, only thing i like about them is that the almost always have goos low but in this one there isn't any good focal it has to be brought ou a bit