Jump?

[cC.Midway]

[Hind]

I like it. I think this will look much better without that border. I don't really like the text placement. I mean, you've got it at a nice place. Just that, when I look at it, I can't help but read it as "Jump miguel away". I know it looks nice and all, but no matter how I look at it, that just doesn't make sense. So maybe try putting miguel on top or below "Jump away"? Or maybe just reduce the opacity of "miguel", that way, it won't link with "Jump away" and people would read either "miguel" first or "Jump away" first. That's what I think anyway. Oh, and you've got some nice effects and flow going on there. Overall, it's great.

[MarkPancake]

Seen this stock used a million times now haha. Overall the effects are actually really nice, although it would've been cooler to see you make some of your own, perhaps pentool some effects in or something, just to make it your own. Nice effects in general though, nice text and liking the B&W.

[cC.Midway]

i've tryed pentool, but i cant place it good need to work on it

[cC.Midway]

V2

[Papa]

eh it's okay. But i wouldhave liked to see you actully get creative. Seen this pretty much before, it's pretty good but i dont feel like it's very unique in any way.

The lighting and the swooshes aorund his feet looks great though give off a smooth effect.
Text is pretty.. killing it. Serif!!! use a serif font. White and a tad bit of glow. it'd look slick down by his leg and rly elongated.

[KidBuu]

well u see text is not a problem. you can just remove the text "miquel" its not necessary u name it If you want just put it on the right bottm or left btm edge where no one can notice it.
Btw here's what you can still do to it, darken the top and dodge the bottom to make it look like thelight source is comign from the bottom. then ignite the effects on the boots, and remove that c4d, its wasting space there. Even though the bottom one looks good the top leg one looks out of place. and i can see a round edge of c4d at the left btm leg. try to fix it up. Good work. keep it up and yeah as spliter said seem that stock millions times and its been modified like that by ratchet before the same way (I dont remember too much details), so it kinda failed to fantasize me ,


But a work is a work and i appreciate it. Nice work GJ

[cC.Midway]

Yeah, next lp i gonna make myself >.>

[BonesMa]

I realy like the crispness of the hands they stand out well.

B+W seems to work well with this style to nice work.

[navb01]

feet are the best part, not big on the text but its pretty cool!