Would like some advice please

[Heepsy]

I been working on this for sometime, finding the right render took me quite a while but i finally found it

but this is what i got so far and im completely stuck in what i should do now, so any advice in what i should do then please do it give it me.

Also CnC please, i will accept all types of comments so do speak your minds, its hard to offend me, thats not a challenge lol




Thanks
~Heepsy

[KidBuu]

er its too weird looking the smudge doesnot blend the render its pretty monotonous and its too b/w tone is too much.

[Heepsy]

theres no smudge in the render its feathered, it was gunna be a tecg sig but after trying it was alot harder and boring than i thought, any advice on making it less boring then Kidbuu?

And thanks for the opinion

[KidBuu]

its boring bcoz its monotonous and oversaturated
you will have to start afresh if you want a tech sig,
coz this looks like grungy sig.
a tech sig looks like boxed art, everything is in boxes and circles. add some cool tech brushes and it will be alright

[Ptka]

Add colour!
Monotone sigs are good sometimes, but this render I believe has some nice red in it, so try to take some of the effects off of the actual render.

[ratchetnclank]

Take off those gmaps and start them again.


Use them in small amounts to enhance the colour rather than completely change it.

Also the composition is off with the render on the left. Try cropping some dead space off the right to sort it out.


Not bad just could be a whole lot better

[Heepsy]

well as they say its "back to the drawing board then" :P thx for all our comments

[navb01]

maybe add some text on this too!

[Proflax]

Yea, text and a 1px Border would help a bit
Text: Go for a like "Impact"-Capital Word and give it a dropshadow and edit it a bit.
border: New layer -> Control + A(selects entire size of the sig) -> Edit->Stroke->1px black "inside".