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Thread: Nature

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    Default Nature

    Simple penwork and some effects with a stock background. The traditional Chinese in it means "nature".
    Very minimalistic, but I enjoy it.
    CnC please.


    V2:
    Last edited by gonhop; 05-13-2009 at 10:14 PM.

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    Nice I like it.
    The text is fairly good, however I don't like those three squares, but the characters are great.
    The pentooling is pretty good, but the sig is very bright in the middle.
    I like the stock you used, and everything is placed fairly well, I would just try to make it darker a bit, and then take out those boxes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ptka View Post
    Nice I like it.
    The text is fairly good, however I don't like those three squares, but the characters are great.
    The pentooling is pretty good, but the sig is very bright in the middle.
    I like the stock you used, and everything is placed fairly well, I would just try to make it darker a bit, and then take out those boxes.
    Thanks, I wasn't sure about the squares, they were generally just to fill in some room and extenuate the colors. I darkened it a bit and took the squares out and it came out a bit better imo.


    Edit(had name from a different forum I posted this one)

    Last edited by gonhop; 05-13-2009 at 10:14 PM.

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    MUCH better, we can actually see the clouds in the background!
    Nice stuff, but I think you could move the characters down a little bit.
    Other than that, it's perfect!
    Nice work.

    AND! Welcome to the Void.
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    the left seems random i cant really tell what that is. but if you dont want to get rid of it i think it is a little over blurred imo

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    V1 for me is the better.

    I like the fact you have to look at it to see whats going on nice work.

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