First Vector

[MarkPancake]

Well my first vector. Can you see who it is? Anyways I know the right eye sucks so much shit that it started to taste good. But I cba working on it anymore

[Garis]

Eyes looks strange.
And I think Darker colors, shadows are missing. I would add more of them I think
but us first vector.
SICKKKK

[Jeff]

Is the background from the original stock? Doesn't make sense to keep it - get rid of it and make your own, even if it's a simple solid color or gradient.

Not bad for a first. Some shapes still look shaky, and although better than before, still needs work on the pen tool technique.

Definitely needs more emphasized highlights and shadows like Garis said - it's too dull overall. It looks like you used partial transparency for shading, which I wouldn't recommend. It doesn't give you enough control, and if you're using blacks/whites for shadows and highlights, then you get stuck with one hue, which makes it look bland and unrealistic. You generally want to use full opacity for each shape and pick your own colors.

Good job for your first - keep practicing.

[Scrib]

nice for first eyes are wierd and so r the shadows but i admire u cause i cba to put as much time into one piece

[Proflax]

Well as said on msn before: its missing something that I think you already know

Awsome for a 1st(serious?) vector!

[cC.ShorterGFX]

looka abit like peter petrelli from heroes

[Ptka]

Really awesome for you first vector, the only real thing is that the eyes are slightly off.
Also, you should make the colours more vibrant, they are washed out.

[navb01]

id say it rocks for a first man! good job

[Dom]

I think it's Peter from Heroes too. Great job mate, I like it, keep it up!