Starfox

[cC.DOMINO™]

tried some new stuff here, cnc pls, thx.



V2


render (cut out by me):

[Ptka]

It's pretty awesome, although I don't like the border being covered by parts of the render.
The colours are pretty sweet and the effects are nice, but it's very flat, not much depth.
Also, try making it a bit smaller, cropping some of the top and bottom might help make it look more complete.

[cC.DOMINO™]

thx for the feedback, I'll see what I can do bout those things, parts of the render in front of the border was intentional, to be like he is stepping out of the sig, and the gun is out also, I guess I'll have to work on that to make that more apparent. thx anyone else? the render I also won ROTM for(Render of the Month), on a forum about 2 yrs ago.

[Ptka]

Well it's a VERY good render, so nice job on that.
I understand where you were going with the effect, and it's not, but it just looks a little odd, making it more apparent that he is stepping out of the sig would be good.

[tekken]

i would say, try and preserve some of the original colour of the render. i agree with Ptka except the colours, not fellin that.

[cC.DOMINO™]

thx for the advice, I updated with V2, tried to do the things you mentioned, and tried to improve the depth, not sure if I succeeded, but it looks betta imo, so thx.

V2

[Dom]

Version 2 is a lot better but I don't like the fact you can't see the end of his gun. Great effects and well blended. Keep it up!