Kobe's attempts to art

[Dungus]

These are some of my attempts to make digital art. I made these over the past few months. I grabbed a few ideas here and there, but I made my own things from it. I know it's not fancy or anything but I'd appreciate some feedback ^^









http://planetrenders.net/renders/alb...0b%20Kopie.png

and

http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1157476



http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1174628





http://www.sxc.hu/photo/146670

http://www.sxc.hu/photo/187211

http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1038795





greetz, Kobe.

[Ptka]

Whoah!
Lots to say, so I'll break it up into parts. I'm just going to comment on the ones that I really liked and that have potential.

The Vivi LP is great, I'm loving the effects and it's very simple and effective.
The only thing you could change with that is to keep your lines more controlled, making sure that you aren't making it too random.

The Sunset LP isn't bad, but it's a little simple. I don't really like the fortune cookie quote, you could come up with something better. Also the reflection of the REALLY bright section, where it shines in the water, you need to fade that properly to match what a real reflection would look like.

The one that says "I LOVE THIS" is REALLY nice. I've seen that tut somewhere but you've done some cool things with it. If you hadn't have blurred the person and hadn't cluttered her up with all those lines, it would have been much better. You should just keep the light painting of the guy crossing the street and a few other subtle things, like the lines on the road and the sidewalk. Keep it simple!

The inspirational hand drawing one is pretty nice as well, but if you had found a more vectored hand, instead of just sticking an effect over it, the whole thing would have looked more vector-ish.

And the last one, it's good and simple, seen that one before too, but it's still nicely done.

Good job Kobe. :P

[Dungus]

Whoah!
Lots to say, so I'll break it up into parts. I'm just going to comment on the ones that I really liked and that have potential.

The Vivi LP is great, I'm loving the effects and it's very simple and effective.
The only thing you could change with that is to keep your lines more controlled, making sure that you aren't making it too random.

The Sunset LP isn't bad, but it's a little simple. I don't really like the fortune cookie quote, you could come up with something better. Also the reflection of the REALLY bright section, where it shines in the water, you need to fade that properly to match what a real reflection would look like.

The one that says "I LOVE THIS" is REALLY nice. I've seen that tut somewhere but you've done some cool things with it. If you hadn't have blurred the person and hadn't cluttered her up with all those lines, it would have been much better. You should just keep the light painting of the guy crossing the street and a few other subtle things, like the lines on the road and the sidewalk. Keep it simple!

The inspirational hand drawing one is pretty nice as well, but if you had found a more vectored hand, instead of just sticking an effect over it, the whole thing would have looked more vector-ish.

And the last one, it's good and simple, seen that one before too, but it's still nicely done.

Good job Kobe. :P

With the 'I love this' pic, I didn't blur the woman, she was already blurred in the picture. It's true, it would have been better if she wasn't blurred.
Thanks for the comment =)

[Ptka]

Oh gotcha, I see that the other people are blurred too.
Keep working on these LP's, I'd love to see all the members making more than just sigs, so good job.