Bumblebee

[SureFire]

This is my latest so be gentle and CnC.



V2

[publikenemy187]

Looks nice, I like the effect on the right side.

The focal seems a little overpowering though, may be because its too large. Try placing the text closer to the focal when you're working on your next one (or if you decide to change this one), because the way it's set up now, the eyes are drawn to two separate locations, but if they were closer together, the eyes flow over it more smoothly.

[Dom]

I quite like it but there are some things I would tweek - firstly, I would change the text; it stands out too much and the font choice is bad. Second, I would try and get some more flow in to it and make the render smaller so it doesn't take up so much room for your effects. Thirdly I would tone down the burning/topazing (I think it is..) because Bumblebee looks very dark, looks orange in places. Not a bad signature, I know all of this critisizm makes it sounds bad but it's constructive and you'll thank me for it if you tweek it.

[Zander]

the render towards the right looks a bit over sahrpened, the render looks a tad dark, i like the text though. overall its a very nice sig