Robots from the future??

[DeadlesS]

this was a bit random....

[tekken]

focal is small and unclear, it also looks LQ.
not feeling it.

[zole]

As tekken said its unclear, the effects look all mashed together, dont really like the compo and teh colours are awful and again it looks very LQ :S no where near up to your standards dead :S

[Ptka]

The bottom one for sure, the top is just too many colours and too many effects.
Still a bit chaotic, and the render is very small and unfocused.
The effects that you have are nice, but they have no direction or flow. Work on it!