Megan Fox :)

[Ballinfolyf131]

well this is my first attempt with a real person. It was VERY hard to concentrate on what i was doing. Thats about 15 c4ds in front of her. Comments, Concerns, Suggestions always welcome.

(sorry if this is the wrong section its kinda in the middle of and LP and a sig)

[Ritz]

Background is nice, but the bottom C4D looks LQ. Not liking the text too much either. Otherwise its a good first attempt, the concept is good as well. Nice job.

[Ballinfolyf131]

thanks yea text will take me a few days before i get the right placement i will move it around see what i get.

[Ballinfolyf131]

anyone else?

[Lulzor]

It looks great. I agree however though with the text. Otherwise this ownz. :P

[Ptka]

This would be an LP, I'll move it.
It's a bit blank, but the C4D's aren't bad.
Just make sure that you add some more in around her up top instead of just at the bottom.

[excellence]

hmm i think that maybe the render needed to be blended with the bg a little more, maybe you should try some different effects where that c4d is

[Ballinfolyf131]

v2: text is better but still needs work. I have to look at my wireframes may need to wip a few out lol. For now this is what i have. Better?

[cC.DOMINO™]

dont like it, very plain, doesnt look like anything was actually done here, just a render, a solid color bg, and a few c4ds slapped in there, and rotated and flipped a few times. sorry if thats harsh, but there are lp's out there with multiple effects done, more work done in general and more action, it just needs more imo.

[Kryzech]

I like it in someway...
I think the text should be moved out from the body.
"Beauty" is also blocking for a tatoo, which is pretty annoying