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    Default its the "IDK what to name this piece"

    lol ya i still dont know wat to say about it, its for AOTF2, although not too good, its worth an effort,

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    the womans head looks like a cut out so try fixing that, and the egg this doesnt fit the theme
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    Cool, SSSSK is right about the head, love the depth and effects

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    hmmm,, ok i got it. forgot abt the head cutout lol
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    hmm fix the girl she looks like she doesnt fit in and same goes with the fire make them look real :-P

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    Quote Originally Posted by SSSSK View Post
    the womans head looks like a cut out so try fixing that, and the egg this doesnt fit the theme
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    Not bad, but that random green part isn't working.
    Just watch that everything is in the same style.
    The original is a photo, and the girl looks animated and the fire and the egg look cartoon, so just try to keep it all consistent.
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    I like it all in general, just feels like there's a few too many elements crammed into one piece.

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    Thanks for the Cnc guys will try harder next time
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    I agree with what have been said above but i have 1 more thing to say, i think you should come up with a new bg in the window. Right now it looks kinda boring, i think you are going for a fantasy themed work. Therefore i think you should have some more fantasy in the bg like a yellow field with a castle on just an example.

    Also i like that you thought about the light she looks at the green light source and therfore she is green in her head, however she is way to green, the source isnt that strong, look at the wall it only lights up a tiny bit but it turns her entire left side more green. That make no sence?

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