Smrz Racing Flyers

[Karter]

Flyer I made to hand out at conventions to search for some potential sponsorship. It was my first "flyer" type design, so any tips would be helpful!

[cC.DOMINO™]

maybe when you are describing yourself in the third person you should use Smrz or Mr. Smrz, instead of saying Brett Smrz so many times, or Brett. kinda sounds more professional cool flyer tho. I think you have Brett Smrz or Brett in there like 8 or 9 times.

[Papa]

Yeah i would agree, makes you sound more legit if you say Mr. Smrz. And also when you say "Brett Smrz generates quite a bit of press". Maybe get rid of quite a bit and say a lot. Makes you sound much more confident. If im gonna endorse somebody i wanna endorse a confident driver not somebody that doesnt know where or not they can pull it off.

[Karter]

Alright, thanks.