First Typography thing

[cC.ShorterGFX]

[DeadlesS]

too dark...
give it more contrast or choose another color scheme...

i've a few similiar to that one..
they look better in brighter colors...
gj anyway..

[Ptka]

DeadlesS is right, give it more contrast or just change the colours to something lighter.

[Blast Designs]

i think you should...

put the brush that looks like a circle and it got a gaussian blur

i dont know where is it at but he PS got it.

you jsut put it in the middle and put the option to soft light

sorry if i bad explain

PD: me no good english

[Tavro]

Poor use of negative space. Somebody correct me if they disagree, but I think the piece would look better if it was taller than it was thin, rather than a strait-up box.

Oh, and I like the typography. Great use of positive space, what little there is.

[cC.ShorterGFX]

ok thanks guys. its dark because i was trying to make it kinda creepy. i was debating whether to but on blood brushes or not. so musnt of worked then . LOL !

[Misterrr]

I think its good
Not too dark ,the darkness is what makes it creepy but just maybe a bit more to have a bit more light on the borders ,just a little bit ..
The blood brushes are cool ,but make them a bit more visible
Good job

[cC.ShorterGFX]

kk

[Lawliet]

I get the idea of making it darker around the edges. But don't you think that having a smooth transition from the center to the exterior.

All in all pretty nice.