WIP

[Ritz]

My text BLOWS

[cc.RadillacVIII]

I really like it ^u^

Yeah text is bad, change it and move it up a bit.

You can blend the render better by erasing the edges a bit.

The left side is to sharp, blur it a little.

Maybe add some more of the purple c4d dots.

Great job man

[Takken]

I love it. The effects are good and the flow is awesome. I would try to add more depth though. Try blurring little areas in the left side. Text sorta sucks. I would choose white with a smaller font size. Great job!

[Ritz]

Thanks for the comments.

V2.

[Sanbu]

Looks reaally good mate. Text is better now. I'm loving the effects in the right lower side. Now I see though what people mean when they tell me my background is a bit plain and empty. But that's only in the top right side and I think you can easily overdo it and ruin it :P So imo just leave it like this. That stock is sooo nice btw, tell me where you got it

[Ritz]

Most of the stocks I get are downloaded in stock packs from other sites. Just google "stock image pack" and a few will come up.

original stock:

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Nice V.2 man, keep it up

[Ptka]

V2 isn't as good in my opinion. The stock looks almost stretched and lower quality with the size increase.
It's almost Immortal-esque in the style, I really like the flow on the sides moving down with her body.
Liking the first text way better, just tone it down a bit and try some different colours.