coldplay update

[turok5011]

can you give me any tips to improve this sig??

[Chidori.]

Um. I suggest using a darker shade of smudging and lighting. Try to get better flow and c4d placement better. Blend more. I suggest re-doing it if that's what your aiming for. Using a better lighting but a darker smudge.

[Takken]

Well, I really can't see any noticeable change (note I'm comparing the one in your sig) I suggest using a darker shade of colours. Keep the smudging. Improve the text. It sorta fails and make the c4ds a bit more vivid.

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Since the last thread when you posted the the same sig you just made it worse.

Way to much c4d who covers him without blending.

Have to agree with Chidori, redo the most of it ^u^

[Ascarine]

Since the last thread when you posted the the same sig you just made it worse.

Way to much c4d who covers him without blending.

Agreed that there are too many C4Ds but overall i would say that the flow they create is alright. I never saw the origional thread so i'm going to treat it as if it were a new sig. What it looks like at the moment is that it's a stock pasted onto a background and C4Ds added. The render needs to be more of a focal.

At the moment the C4Ds are taking away from the focal itself. Next basic thing i would do is seriously burn the edges of it so that you get a defined light source. At the moment all you've got is a white spot at the top that looks like part of the background, something like a spotlight maybe. This could be adapted into the sig as a feature but at the moment it's not

I would remove the Pen tool around his arm as it's not really nessasery because it's so minor i didn't see it till i looked closer to find more to comment on. There is also a C4D next to his head coming down his next till just past his sholder i would remove as it is a distraction. Thats all i can think of atm but will say more if i find it = )