Character

[KidBuu]

well i m kinda flooded with options to modify but the thing is i cant modify him, i mean i just cant help but make him worse and worse, although this was not the result i wanted, here he is, my character for a story i have written. CAN SOMEONE TIP ME UP HOW TO IMPROVE HIM?
dint refer anyone though. I need some good tuts to modify him. the face sucks and i wanna make him look more sturdy

[Rai]

try adding more detail, I see you used lightning a bit, but be more consistant on it. Head looks a bit too round, try adding more tight lines, maybe bigger jaws? Belt looks paperthin, add more detail! If you're not satisfied with the result, just redo it. You'll learn from it:

this is how I'd do it, might help you
my quick sketch:


I'll take it down if you want

[KidBuu]

nah its all good, i liked it, i knew the head was round but idint knew how to improve it
thanks for the help